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Thought I saw you in the shadows
Caught you in the corner of my eye
But when I turned to look upon your beauty
You slithered out of view once again

Kind of funny where my life has led me to
I will never be able to be with you
I can't even have you in my mind
In my very deepest of heart-felt dreams
You slip away from me once again
Slip away into the arms of another

I gave myself in my entirety for the slightest chance with you
I sacrificed everything I could ever give for you
Had you asked, I would have given you even more
Till sacrificed, I lay bleeding upon the altar
I built in simple reverence of you

I know...
I would kill him for a chance to behold your beauty once again
I would erase history and start over new
For just one more chance to be with you.
I would purge my mind of every little thing
If I could just get you once more in my head...
©2006-2009 ~OblivionEnigma
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Author's Comments

I wrote this a relatively short while ago. It wasn't terribly great, and I put it in scraps. In hindsight, though, I like the emotion in it--it was if anything an understatement of my emotion at the time of writing it. Still feel this way a lot...


--OE

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:iconfizzletto:
*huggles* Aw Chris. *pets*

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:iconalissapeekaboo:
very nice! somber, intense, and sad...good job :D

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Thank you, my friend. *hugs*
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It's sad, but the feeling in it...wow. I like.

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Didn't your mother ever tell you that it's not polite to bleed all over someone else's floor?
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Very nice. Interesting use of verbs.

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